Reviews for Fatality I: Teasing - Final Fantasy

person s and s blah

schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I'm back miss me have been on for a while, but I just read the chapter 11 and thought it was wonderful.
Chapter 12 should be great as well. I can't wait to see if Squall will follow after Irvine(I sure hope so).

Any way please keep the great and wonderful piece of art coming and I will be back to read it.

Thanks for the entertainment

s and s blah

person Koji Nokemono

schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM

heheheh what was I gonna go on about now ..... o.o OI fergot already ..... damn well um... I'm glad you continued it rather quickly :3 because I like the story.... In fact XD I wrote my own and it's up heheheh oh the inspiration x.x As for me, if you're trying to get me sad about it, I can't say it'll completely work because I'm a terrible person :P I laugh at Irvines bitterness o.o' don't even as why .... ANYWAY it's good ^ ^ you definately need to keep going :> <333

person Naniris

schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I think that the lyrics fit nicely with the overall tone of this chapter. The next chapter is the last one, right?

I like how it could go either way, if Irvine's ultimatum is enough to break Squall out of his shell, or if it'll blow up in the cowboy's face.

person Koji Nokemono

schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM

yaaaaay Irvine x Squall pairings :> my favorite kind XD I like the way it's written too because of the indivuality idea kinda, with reasonings ...... it's hard to say but yeah :P when I first started reading, I though the way of writing was a little odd, but then again I'm not the one writing it. *shakes head* i can't explain it x.x oh well, update soon and I'll checkback soon or sumin ^ ^ <333

Although that paragraph of Rinoa catching them banging on the desk.... ohh that was so cold man ;_; that was just harsh

person Shikami

schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Wow...
This was amazing, and I only read the first chapter! Yre gre gifted. Really. I just had to stop myself after the first chapter to leave a review. You can bet that I will try and read everything you write. ^_^ I am now your loyal fan. Hahaha-cough-hahaha.
~Shikami

person Keishi

schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM

LOL, I don't hate you or this chapter. I certainly didn't expect them to just fall immediately into roetaletal-and-champagne love for each other right away. Though... your author notes seem to convey that this fic isn't going to end happily, hmm? Either way, please don't stop writing.

And you should definitely write more FF8!

person s and s blah

schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Irvy crying. I wish I could hold his hand and help him maybe beat Squall upside the head, so that he will be able to admit that he loves Irvy. Irvy will get Squall in the end right?:)

person Guenhwyvarsmind

schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM

*sniffle* Poor Irvine... and poor Squall too. And yet - they're both right. How are they going to resolve this? *waits*

I've got my one solitary FFVIII fic up here, maybe you saw the name there? Although it's probably recognizable to anyone familiar with the "Forgotten Realms" universe. ;)

person s and s blah

schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Sorry bout no punctuation. Wrote that last review in a hurry. This one is just to tell you that I really love Squall and Irvine together and to give you the punctuation mark that I missed last time you place them where they need to go.

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Any left save for later.

person Lion

schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Not bad. The Laguna/Squall thing has me all... naseated, but other than that it was a good read. Keep up the nice work.

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