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Please update soon, I so luv love triangles;)

Hi Worsel^_^ I'm glad you put up a second chappie:) It seemed that Tifa was a bit jeleous of Cloud and Vincent, but seemed to understand Vincent made him happy. Well, from the phone calls then the way she seemed to accept Vincent as Cloud's love. I thought this was well conveyed in a subtle way. I could kind of see a Cloud/Vincent/Tifa love triangle. Possible plot bunny?

the opening sentence, how the 7th heaven was like a monster that pulled Cloud in struck me as powerful. And the affection between Vincent and Marline was sweet too. Can't wait to see Seph come in:D I can't think of any suggestions so far, characters seem solid and plot is building up. I'll let ya know if anything comes to mind in future chapters. Take care! Keep writing. I think reviews can be inspiration and help us keep writing, so I hope my feedback was helpful.

Naomi

*presses a big scary gun to your head* no waiting man, update, hurry with it and make it long, or *grins maniacally* muahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


PS: yes, this means that I love the story, love the idea of it, and want another doze of it and would back for it but is sooooo deprived that Id rather use the method 0.0 >_>;;; -___-;;;;; XDD

Very intriguing...please continue it! ^_^ I like the direction that it's heading in (hehe...) =D

A good beginning here, honestly. ^^ I think your characterization is solid, and it doesn't look like you're falling into the "weak and helpless Cloud" we see all too often. For that alone I would praise you, but you also seem to have an intriuging plot and, at least in the beginning, my fav ffvii pairing. Woot.

I thought that this first chapter has alot of possibility. I like how you captured Clouds feelings that he can't just live his life and is always being dragged into things that he really wants to stay out of. Advent children really expressed that and I think its an important element. Cloud is a naturally caring person, willing to fight, but when it comes down to it, he'd really just like a break to not feel responsible for everything.
This fic seems to have alot of possibilities and I can't wait for more!!

Very good start, great premise...I'd read it even if I weren't a total sucker for a rational Sephiroth! It will be interesting to see him as completely sane, and not mushily OOC. In my opinion, it is more difficult to write the rational, ordinary human being than the insane. It's also a nice portrayal of Cloud as a strong and complete person. It's really easy to write him as a weak little uke, probably because he's such a short shit. Capturing the everyday ambivalence and complications of being human is not easy. Please do keep writing, because I assuredly will keep reading!

More important than length I think, was a deep thoughtout dialogue. I found it beautiful and poetic, please continue!