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Hi there, i was just woundering what the title of your story is called(the one where Cloud gets preg from Seph) well let me know 'cause i would rwally like to read it. thank you

Not too bad, actually.

I admire you for putting your work out there even though you know that it might get trashed on. I'm not a writer, but have always wanted to write great stories. I encourage you to keep writing and posting even when people tend to say mean things. I understood what you wanted to say even at times when it wasn't very clear in the story. I give your story 4 **** :)

that's a kool story. i don't mean to offend you, but mabye you should try spell ckeck next time. it waz wote terrible. pleaz don't hate me 4 saying that.

this iz sorasgirl!!!
PS. pleaz don't take it the wrong way! :)

I thought it was cute ^^. Only disadvantage was the at times bad grammar. You also seem to have the tendency to quickly mention certain events that are actually key events in this story, such as the trio going to the reactor in Nibelheim. These things should have been much more developed.