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good* stuff XD

Oh. My. God. That was absolutely awesome! First of all I think that the thermometer broke. SO HOT! You're amazing! I'm so happy that Squall passed the test and with such a score, wow! I wonder what Teo will say about it and of course if he makes moves on Squall in general. That child case seems interesting and the race, I can't wait to see what hapens next! I hope Squall doesn't get hurt at the race if he takes place, I ha ve so much agony! What more can I say!? Please update soon, you rock!

***WARNING: The following comment is shameless and perverted.***

So... Normally I read new chapters with one hand in my pants... and it takes me a good hour or two to work my way through them... LOL...
But Oh. My. God... When Squall said “Hard, give it to me daddy, fuck me"... I had to drag my boy off WoW and RAPE him. Hard. Repeatedly.
He wanted me to tell you thanks. [Will review properly when I'm done finishing the chapter. XDD]

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BEST. CHAPTER. EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.
Hahahahahaaha.

No really. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the plot of this... but it's been too long since we've had a shamelessly smutty chapter. XDD
I love how Squall is willingly calling him Daddy now.
ILU!!!

OMG
this story is totes awesome
but i need more
i must know what happns to Seifer and squall
they are so cute together (i may have to get a check if cute is the best word for it (current possible candidates are HOT (capitals make everything better) and lushalicious))
as my closing statement, keep up the good work

...You've gotten me to the point where I practically jump up and down with excitement when you update. T_T

Teo makes me so jealous. Ever since I turned all Seifer/Squall I'm so pissy whenever anyone else even talks to Squall. XDD

Seifer apologizing = wow. Poor Squall for getting stuck in the middle of all of that.

Loved the chapter, but a couple things were confusing me. First: Teo was saying how he didn't agree with what Seifer did at the club, but Teo participated also...so did Seifer just tell Teo that Squall acts that way all the time while he's being fucked? Cause I'm pretty sure Squall was pleading for them to stop. Secondly, do you need someone to edit your stories? Because as much as I love your writing, your grammar really sucked in that chapter (I mean this in the nicest way possible!) So if you do need someone just let me know and I'll gladly do it for you. Just contact me at oooshiny88@hotmail.com. My name's Virginia

Wow, this was amazing! I loved it! I hope Teo doesn't get mad at Squall for punching him and make a move on him, Seifer being all jealous and stuff is so fun (sorry Seify)XD. To be honest, I'd really like to know how the whole conversation between Seifer and Teo progressed. Oh and I hope Squall passes the test which he seems he will. This story is simply amazing, I hope you update soon and yes totally oblivious, especially Squally XD.

I've been a reader for months and have always loved your stories...they're always incredibly sexy and creative. Just wanted to let you know that it's perfectly fine that you don't update that often. Sure, I'd love for you to update more often, but the way I see it: you have a life and things come up. I love your writing, and keep it up. And yes, I want to hurt the landlord.