rate_review Reviews

I just now started reading this story and have to say that it's really good. Good enough that I sat in front of my computer and read all 24 parts at once. It's nice to see a story that has lemon but also features real character development and plot. Thanks

You definitely succeeded in making Squalls birthday yummy. Though I suppose we still wont find out his real age, hm? xD

Oh sweet fucking Jesus. Lord! The Porn has cometh! GOD FUCKING DAMNIT! YOU WRITE THE BEST SEIFER/SQUALL PORN ON THE ENTIRE FUCKING PLANET!!!!!!!!!
I mean, SHIT! You should teach classes! And Seifer is such a fucking bad-ass about it all XD Hehe, I wouldn't be surprised if Squall ends up being a little more submissive towards the man from now on x3

I know you life is busy, and that writing is your craft... but may I make a request? If at all possible... could Seifer eventually fist Squall? I thought that that was what you had planned for Squall when he was being stretched, but the beads... man... that was really fucking hot!

*bows and scraps*
Keep up the fucking excellent fucking work!

You requested reviews so here it comes: You did very well again ! I really like this story and your way of writing it.

gah o_o rough sex i say! XD

Loved it!!!!!! Plenty of hot action with a touch of plot. Perfect!! The only criticism I would have would be in increasing spelling issues. If you need a second set of eyes, I would be willing to help.
RentaiKitten

heyy!!!! update!!!!
can't wait to see what happen to dear Squally next!! will he find out about Quistis' motive???
and drooling for more lemon-y goodness here!!!

next chapter please!

oh please write more

UPDATE PLEASE *________*
I was re-reading it and really can't wait for the next chapter [and smut >D]