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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! new chapter!! Poor nida, though. i wonder what squall and him will think of each other? can't wait for the next chapter!
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter. This one was really good. I'm not sure how I feel on Squall's last reaction, I understand he is in a special predicament and feeling vulnerable but I don't think Squall would so quickly "want" Seifer with him. But I think you will flesh that out better as the next chapters come out. ^^
I also particularly liked the beginning of the chapter.
I also particularly liked the beginning of the chapter.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squall's name is pretty appropiate, lol, my rp partner's Seifer would always make a joke that Squall's name was appropriate because he 'squalled' a lot. DX
Love this.
Love this.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that Squall isn't giving in, :D! Seifer has met his match :B
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, an appearance of a mysterious stranger! Also, Squall spitting on Seifer. XD I can see that, defiantly.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and so the appearance of the scars comes to be! This really makes me wonder where Squall has come from, who he is, and more about him in general! Hopefully we'll find more out about him soon!
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Seifer tests slaves out like that? Hmm... well at least it wasn't rape! Gah, I hope you update soon ;). This story is pretty fun to read, and I really do look forward to more.
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty excited about this story! :P
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Oh my goodness, the tension between Seifer and Squall is delicious!
And wow, that scene with Tidus was HOT. I can't wait for another chapter. Please continue!! This story is really different and interesting.
And wow, that scene with Tidus was HOT. I can't wait for another chapter. Please continue!! This story is really different and interesting.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD I LOVE THIS. Please don't die, Squall.
It sure would show Seifer, though. Controlling bastard.
Who I secretly love.
It sure would show Seifer, though. Controlling bastard.
Who I secretly love.