rate_review Reviews

I really like your story. Im not a big slash fan but youve managed to keep it tastefull, i look forward to new installments to your chapters. Any one that would dare flame this is either homophobic or just plain idiotic. Please update soon?

Noooes! I hope there's more soon. I had this story bookmarked for well over a month and probably avoided reading it because of the length (and my sparse time alloted for online intrigues), and NOW, dang it all, I wish it was longer. This is really amazing.
I do get mildly confused at where the story is coming from at scene changes, but I just look for a name and then figure it out. I prefer it to noted time changes. 'Present' 'Ten Years Ago', that sort. It's choppier but somehow more fluid (that makes no sense)- I guess in that, it doesn't interrupt the narration.
I am just in love with your portrayals of Auron, Braska and Jecht. You painted Jecht to be the raging pain in the ass I always knew he was. The constant angsting is just paradise for me. The love between Auron and Braska is so complicated, I can't quite even wrap my brain around it without kind of killing the buzz of forlorn longing that it invokes. (I'm such a sucker for emotional pain.)
I really hope more is forthcoming.

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In response to Glass, those aren't glaring grammatical errors. Those are errors that 90% of the stories have on this site, either a glitch when they were uploaded or a problem with the existing programming. (Much in the way that there seems to always be an underscore before 'expression' in emails and other websites... or is that just me?)

The spelling and grammar for this fic is, as near as I can tell, immaculate.

Very sweet, and well written. You could use a beta, however. There are some rather glaring grammatical errors and repeated words. STill, it's like, a million times better then the crap you usually find here! I really, really enjoyed it!

i know its been awhile since you wrote on this one (your last update was in august of lasar) ar) but i thought it was a very strong story, with great plot, characterization, and tons of potential. i understand about having difficulty writing a particular story--some days the thread just won't spin--but i hope that you find your muse soon on this one. you've got me hooked and while i know what happens at the end of eveing,ing,ouldould like to know what happens in your world.

This story is so beautifully written.

I was reluctant to read it, because I couldn't really grasp the idea of Braska and Auron..You know. :P But I was suprised. This isn't "Yaoi" for the sake of yaoi, like much of the stuff I've seen looming around this site. This has a point, and it's wonderful. You are doing a great job. Keep writing!

wow..you're doinglly lly well. i can't really think of anything to say to encourage you, but...please, write more.

Beautiful writing! Tescrescriptions of battles and magic use are very interesting, makes you think about those aspects of the game we so often take for granted. I'm anticipating the next chapters!

I love this story! Sometimes it's terribly hard to find well-written FF10 fic, particularly when it involves Braska - but I must say that you've pulled it off wonderfully. Though there are some breaks in flow, the character dynamics more than make up for it. I can't wait to read more!