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Reviews for To Trust A Cop

By : Shehanitan
  • From delonariel on March 12, 2009
    That... was a really disturbing chapter. Emotionally more so than sexually, because at first I couldn't believe either that Seifer would go so far as to cause Squall actual *pain.*
    Squall might be too stunned to be mad about it later on though, so in terms of their relationship this chapter seemed significant. Still, I think it deserves a full-blown non-con warning because the mood isn't quite the same as in the other chapters.

    Great work again! Can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - MEMORIETRAIL on March 07, 2009
    Omg that was so hot! You do write so great, I love it!
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  • From pipdfunnybunny on March 07, 2009
    This was HOT. *smooches her favorite author* Please, please, please don't ever let Squall near Teo again? I'm so happy with this chappie! ;P
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  • From ANON - lightning on March 05, 2009
    OMG you're awesome! Int the beginnign I didn't want it to be Seifer, then I didn't know whether I wanted it to be Seifer or someone else and then I was glad it was Seifer! It was so hot! I'm curious to see what happens when Squall wakes up he he you rock!
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  • From IntHellsing on March 05, 2009
    ::pants::
    .............God. I feel like I can't breathe. Hahaha.
    That chapter was beyond hot.
    I'm glad Squall didn't have the chance to get hurt in the race, but I wonder how he's going to take what Seifer's done? This chapter was great and I'm so excited for the next chapter!
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  • From delonariel on March 01, 2009
    Haevn't reviewed in a while so I just caught up on quite a few chapters. Love the new character developments, especially Teo even though his personality really rubs me the wrong way. He's a creepy sort of guy, but he really compliments the story and Seifer and Squall's relationship. Squall socking him just about made my day!
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  • From ANON - Zannie on February 26, 2009
    Wails* waaaaaaaaah. Update! *POUTS like Selphie.*

    Btw, Any other characters popping up by any chance? Seems a shame to not include Selphie, and I haven't seen Zelly since the beginning! Chicken wusses need love too! *cries*

    Whoa, I've gone and ranted. Whoops. Well, I just wanna say this is my most favourite fic on adultfanfiction so I hope you will continue to write on it. I loved Office Follies too!

    ooodles and noodles....Zannie. x
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on February 01, 2009
    Oh it was so good and I'm very happy to see you have wrote more.
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  • From ANON - lightning on January 29, 2009
    Wow, I liked this chap a lot! I'm happy Teo is back to the pic and I like that Squall's confused. I'd like to see Seifer more jealous though he he I love thsi story a whole lot, hope you update soon, well done once again!
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  • From IntHellsing on January 29, 2009
    Mmmm. That sounds like loads of delicious catching up. Can't wait for all that, then.

    I'm still so jealous over Teo [snarl]. Lol.
    I'm practically dying waiting to see what's going to happen with Seifer and Squall regarding this race.
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  • From pipdfunnybunny on January 28, 2009
    Hey! I've been a loyal reader for a while (though I didn't get to review some chapters). I'm not bothered by the length of the story (I was actually quite happy that you keep on writing!). Right now though, I'm not very happy with Squall's character. In the beginning I really liked how you wrote him, but in this particular chapter I don't like him. I could handle the Nida thing and I know that I suggested Seifer should have some Laguna-like competition, but now that Teo's in the picture I'm not happy. :( I know, I'm a naughty reviewer, but...well, I guess I just wanted someone who would make Seifer straighten out his act. Not someone that Squall would actually respond to. I mean, he did pull away from Teo at the end, but I disliked the idea of him heading back to Teo in the first place, even with Quistis' suggestion. And what's with Seifer? First he actually shares Squall with Teo, then he doesn't want Squall around Teo, and now...I guess I thought that they'd have gotten past just being casual by now.

    I'm sorry. I suck as a reviewer right now. Just ignore me...
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  • From ANON - yacumo on January 27, 2009
    I really love this story... but I kind of donīt like where it is heading... specially with ths Theo guy.... whatever........ I donīt know what to say... it kind of sucks. I t really looked like a last minute chapter.....so short!!!! I really love your longer chapters full of yummyness.

    Hope to read you soon.
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  • From chamorrican56 on January 22, 2009
    thank you so much for making this story! it has been so good to me (especially during my boring days in school ;P )
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  • From ANON - Zannie on January 14, 2009
    Awesome. And dont worry, the characters are believable enough without too much exposition. Who the hell needed more explaining?

    Can't wait for the next one!


    OOoodles and noodles....Zannie
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  • From ANON - delonariel on December 25, 2008
    Great work as awlays. I've really been enjoying Seifer's character development recently.
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