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Reviews for To Trust A Cop

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - LT on November 22, 2006
    Seifer is so messed up. Will he ever understand that physical pleasure does not equal consent and lack of psychological damage? Squall's too good at hiding and being proud . . . otherwise, he'd probably have broken down and bawled by now. (Not that I think Squall should cry! That'd be sickeningly OOC.) So, how has Squall been avoiding Seifer? I hope Seifer is frustrated even more in the next chapter. It's time he got a little torture for everything he's put Squall through.
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  • From ANON - SuiCausa on November 21, 2006
    Such a MINOR thing.
    -dies laughing- xDD
    I'm working on the chapters. Sorry it's taking so long. =x
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  • From ANON - Momochi on November 21, 2006
    I loved this chapter~! It's starting to form a nice plot. :3 I love how Seifer's getting all affected by this, I wonder how Squall feels though? :D I hope you update soon! Keep this story up, it's so good.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 21, 2006
    Loved it. Great chapter, and well needed after the last. It's good to see that while Seifer doesn't exactly regret his moves, he at least knows he went too far. And I'd love to see Irvine play a larger part. I could almost see Squall getting a little attached to him and Seifer getting all jealous. Good job and keep it up!
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  • From Sammei on November 20, 2006
    Well, it was a little shorter than the other chapters, but still good. ^_^ I'm glad to see Squall finally stood up for himself. I mean, yes, it's hot as hell when they go at it, but y'know... Squall can only take so much, right? And I know that you said there won't be much more from Seifer's POV, but this chapter was a good one, because you can finally see that Squall is getting under his skin... Great job, as usual. ^_^ Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - florinoir on November 20, 2006
    LOL!! Will Seifer finally apologize or force his way(as always)? If he can find Squall, of course...
    /Seifer/Fuck off...
    Go use your fist, blue balls!^^
    Good continuation!^^
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  • From ANON - Sekre on November 19, 2006
    Haha, so squally is being a brat now, hm??? He won't be able to resist The Seifer-ness, which is probably why he's avoiding him xDDD I could see why Squall would be pissed though - I'm sure he's humiliated from getting turned on by his 'raper' and getting fucked out on a public dirty wall no less ... and for Seifer getting so involved in his life. I would love to see what our bastard-of-an-almasy do next.
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  • From ANON - YACUMO on November 19, 2006
    You are not ruining his character at all!! You in fact my dear writter are making him more human..........and a lot sexier iof what he was!!!!

    I also love the way in which ypu turned the roles and made Squall extremely angry towards Seifer. I really loved that part.

    Hope to read you soon.
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  • From ANON - Tryst on November 19, 2006
    You didn't ruin anything about his character. Actually, I was pretty surprised at how well you portrayed him. Just reading about Seif getting an ego boost from sex with Squall was just so fucking hot. It left me wanting more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2006
    Please hurry with more and Seifer should feel a little bad at least. He could find a way to make up for being such an asshole.
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  • From ANON - nora on November 15, 2006
    I actually found ch. 9 to be pretty dang hot.
    I'm glad it was Seifer though, I would have been upset if it was anyone else. I hope Seifer realises that Squall has had some issues in the past with being raped though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2006
    Well I donīt know if what those two shred can be called friendship, but it canīt really end up here!?! That would be just wrong!!! Since Seifer is the only one who can make Squall really *loose it* if you know what I mean...
    And think about Zell, Irvine and Raijin!!! How they are going to have a ride if this is going to end here!?!
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  • From ANON - Momochi on November 15, 2006
    Wooooow, I just *knew* it was Seifer though. :3 Haha, this chapter is super steamy, I loved it [how sick am I?!]. Please continue, and I know that they're gonna be together in the end, because they're going to end up in a relationship right?? :D
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  • From ANON - YACUMO on November 15, 2006
    Great sex scene....but you have a little problem with the tenses.....you were......no you was.

    Oh by the way, although I love how you are making Seifer a fucking asshole I beleive that he went too far this time.
    One thing is to play a rape scene, and another one is to actually do it and have the fucking balls to say to your lover...sex parter....whatever that he is a bicth and take it as one.
    Como on....a little cold shoulder from Squall and a 1% tenderness from your fucking rapist of a representation of Seifer wont harm no one.

    As always a pleasure and hope to read you soon.
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  • From ANON - Sekre on November 14, 2006
    Peh. It would be seifer, huh? Though I think he's jerk for that, I did find it reallly hot xD I dunno, I think he could've done worse by going all the way before revealing himself - his morals might be...questionable, but I don't think he would go as far as to actually rape somebody. I think Squall could get over it, Seifer's a great 'package' after all.
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