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By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - hardleyf on September 02, 2009
    oh! let Siefer bring on the pain.
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  • From arsenicstings on September 01, 2009
    I really liked this chapter ^.^ I like how Seifer is totally in acceptance of his feeling for Squall and I love how devoted he is to the brunet. I gather you didn't just put this guy in the story for no reason and I trust we'll be seeing him again. I thought it was clever how you made parallels between Seifer and this mystery guy. Awesome! I hope for more soon!!! And more sex!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2009
    LOOOOOVEEEE this story can't wait an see what happens next!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sam on September 01, 2009
    please keep writing,your plot is very good and i love the random twists and truns you throw in
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  • From ANON - florinoir on September 01, 2009
    Aaaaaah!!I'm dying here!! I realy do want to read more!!!^Good continuation!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2009
    Ugh it's me again. I don't wanna sound like a conceited know-it-all bitch, specially because this is your story and you do whatever the hell you want with it, so if you wanted to change this, you obviously could, but in the game the gunblades don't actually shoot, they produce a shockwave which vibrates when you press the trigger and causes more damage. This is all according to that official guide Ultimania. Of course, gunblades seen in Advent Children are different types.

    Sorry about that, I'm just one of those pestering Final Fanatics. And despite all this I just said, I really liked the shooting range scene.

    Okay. Now I'll just sit and wait for the next chapter like the godamn good kid I am.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2009
    Woohoo finished! I think it took me 3 or 4 days to read it all. Now just have to wait for you to finish, which is probably gonna be painful, being impatient as I am...

    Anyway..

    Chapter 41... oh god, never read a fuck so romantic! Well, maybe I did, but this one was over the top, what with being officer Seifer and all. Dare I call that "making love" instead of "fucking"? And... did Seifer blow Squall or was I imagining it? Wasn't... wasn't that the first time...? Oooh.

    For some reason I loved this piece of dialogue:


    “Seriously, does that brain of yours ever stop spinning? Hyne, you could probably talk yourself into thinking the sky was green,” Almasy muttered.

    Squall frowned.

    “Do you ever think?” he countered.


    Well, I don't really care about spelling errors much, but the constant anal/anus mixing up was kinda... well I found it funny.

    And I seriously encourage the sequel, as lots of others probably did too.

    (God, 3 reviews in a row, it feels like spamming)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2009
    Alright, just finished the 38th, now I have to go out, which sucks 'cause I'm too damn curious.

    I, like many people, don't care much for OCs but every once in a while there's one that gets through. Multi-faced Teo is one of them. I find him interesting...almost wish Squall would end up with him instead of Seifer... and I always imagine him looking like Peter Steel o.O have no idea why though. It's probably because of those darn playboy pictures of him, naughty Pete...

    I thought after the threesome he would be ashamed of meeting Teo because he would be thinking, "Dear god, that man's arm was inside my asshole!" but it didn't even faze him. Strong Squall. I think he's probably must be a slut like Seifer likes to call him.

    Chapter 32 had Squall using Seifer for sex and not the other way around for once, that wan fun :)

    Know what's weird? I found that kiss between Squall and Teo on chapter 37 hotter than smut

    The gigantic dildo machine on 38 was awkward. Was it bigger then Teo's arm? Whoa. One of these days Squall's gonna get all loose and Seifer won't want him anymore. Hell, he probably is all goatse by now hahah I seriously thought his mind would break and he would end up in some sanatorium, all his talents going to waste and Quistis losing the bet.

    Alright. Gotta go but I'll sure be back for this lewd, lewd tale. See ya!

    (Haha according to my spell-checker, "dildo" is not a word, but dictionary.com says it it... silly spell-checker)

    (Haha 2 the spamkiller made me write "manhandle". Ok, I really gotta go now)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2009
    Alright, so far I've read like 10 or 12 chapters, it's impossible to read everything at once, my eyes water too much.

    I gotta hand it to you, you have what it takes. You are good. I've been missing authors like that since I last read a few stories on the DBZ fandom.

    The rough sex you write is too godamn sexy. I asked my friends if they'd do it like that and they said 'no way', to which I was kinda sad.

    The "hyne" thing doesn't bother me anymore, guess I got used to it. Can't get used to the "dende" thing though (don't worry, this is not with you)

    Oh hell, guess I'm way too drunk to make a decent review, and god knows your stories deserve a nice review. Sorry. I'll come back some other time, maybe after I read ten more chapters or so.
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  • From ANON - Aralaiqualasse on August 15, 2009
    Hi, I lobve this fic very much, and blush evrytime i read it....Man, i first time read a fic where it has sex scene in all chapter......and did not feel odd since u make the story run smoothly...

    i hope they will be together at last....I mean like lover....

    by they way, can u pls gimme the lover trust summary? I just few hint here and there...what the hell happen to Squall to make him snap... Rape?


    thanks...update soon TTAC...I really love it.....

    PS: Will Laguna appear in TTAC?
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  • From Spophaloaf on August 15, 2009
    Really enjoyed this chapter, definitely well worth the wait! I love how Quistis can see through Squall and see his "glow," effectively, before Squall even knows himself.

    I hope they can be happy! Please keep up the fantastic work :)
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  • From IntHellsing on August 15, 2009
    God I love you.
    Marry me? I'll support you forever while you do nothing but write delicious stories for me all day.
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  • From DracoDormiens on August 04, 2009
    I'm up for a sequel! Absolutely 100%! :D
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  • From DekorxAo on August 03, 2009
    I like the idea of more plot, less lemon! Honestly, I think there is such a thing as too many sex scenes. While your lemons are probably the best sex scenes I've ever read, it gets a little tiring trying to read all the steaminess! LOL I find myself craving the plot more, so when I get plot I'm all excited! Especially since I love your plot writing just as much as your kinky sex writing! lol

    I'm wondering if anything will come out of this new development with the crazy killer guy, and I can't wait to see! Anyway, keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Rangiku on July 25, 2009
    (I'm sorry i had to double post as my review was not fully uploaded due to a faulty line) >
    ,there are too much things left hanging in the last chapter and i'm so glad that Seifer is still Seifer.
    i like the tension of the story, it keep things interesting =D

    i'm all hands for a sequel, though it will have have less smut, as i think that you're really talented in
    creating both good storyline and lemon. and i do agree with the ending of this latest chapter that
    a little lemon is not suitable. a little lime should keep the fun going, hehe.

    keep up the writing =)
    i'll always be your loyal fan~~!!!!
    P.S : i'm looking forward to an update for Office follies, i nid a tint of naive Seifer vs Persistent Squall
    after all the excitement of this fic ^^
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