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Reviews for To Trust A Cop

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - Rangiku on July 25, 2009
    i am sooo excited to read this chapter >,there are too much things left hanging in the last chapter and i'm so glad that Seifer is still Seifer.
    i like the tension of the story, it keep things interesting =D

    i'm all hands for a sequel, though it will have have less smut, as i think that you're really talented in
    creating both good storyline and lemon. and i do agree with the ending of this latest chapter that
    a little lemon is not suitable. a little lime should keep the fun going, hehe.

    keep up the writing =)
    i'll always be your loyal fan~~!!!!
    P.S : i'm looking forward to an update for Office follies, i nid a tint of naive Seifer vs Persistent Squall
    after all the excitement of this fic ^^
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  • From sikare on July 25, 2009
    I'd be interested in a sequel :D
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  • From ANON - I.Hellsing on July 21, 2009
    Oh yessss. A sequel. I need it in my life. Hahah.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2009
    love this chapter
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  • From ANON - Hubcap on July 19, 2009
    Hello! I just wanted to say thanks for writing, it seriously makes my day when I see that a new chapter is up! Sorry that this is my first review... but I've been reading since the beginning and this is the first story that I check when I come to AFF. I am very impressed with your writing style and the vividness of your creations. The story wraps its reader into it and it is impossible not to come back and find out what happens. You have adapted the characters so well. They fit within the original FF8 storyline and yet have their own uniqueness in the story, it makes them very real and easy to relate to.

    I hope strongly hope that you are also writing your own creations outside of fan-fictions (don't misunderstand, I am addicted to them..but) I feel as though you would make an excellent author. You were able to take a storyline and make it completely your own; you created a schooling system, a town and a plot full of characters who come to life on the page and that are related to one another in some way. Your story flows so amazingly well it is hard to believe that you are updating this one chapter at a time without the ability to go back and change something in the story. You have talent, just look at how far you have gotten on this story as well as others, people love to read your stories. And, I myself would love to read more of them. I hope with my fingers crossed that you make this story into a sequel. Not only because I love this particular story, but because you are one of..come to think of it, you are my favorite author on this site. Your writing is above and beyond most of the other writers capabilities on this site.

    I hope that this doesn't come across as some crazy, just a reader who hoped to praise someone for a job very well done, and with the hopes of another story. Hope that you aren't suffering too bad in the July heat!!

    Your respectful reader,

    Hubcap
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  • From on July 19, 2009
    I am so up for a sequel!!1 And a plot filled sequel at that! You spoil us!! :D

    This chapter was... weird to say, but very cute. I just really liked the part at the beginning with Squall unsure of everything, and then the ending, it was wrapped up so nicely. :D
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  • From ANON - lightning on July 19, 2009
    Omg omg omg omg! The end!? No! I want a sequel! lol wow nice chapter! I laughed at the end with Seifer "never even though of it?" ha ha! and aww Squall was in danger!? Wow, you said that the sequel, if there is one, will have more plot, oh I wanna read! lol plz tell me will there be a sequel? will there? will there? XDD
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  • From arsenicstings on July 19, 2009
    Fuck yea there better be a sequel! This is the never-ending saga that I will always look forward to! I have to give you credit though, when you aren't writing hot sex scenes, which you're the best at, you also have a unique writing style which i'm digging!
    I like where the story is going, and of course, you can't end it without a hot sex scene filled with passion that Squall realizes he has for Seifer... and that might take a couple chapters, and some psychos intervening.
    I was so glad you finally updated!! Keep it up pleaseeeeee

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  • From Spophaloaf on July 19, 2009
    Personally, I think you should carry on with this one until at least the case is sorted, because it's still a part of the same storyline.

    Once the case is over, maybe then a sequel for the feelings between the two?

    But back to the chapter, I enjoyed it, and I would definitely like to see more. I think maybe a nice ending to this particular "part" of the story would be to have Squall captured and Seifer rescue him against all odds!

    Then in the sequel, as I said previously, the feelings between the two can be explored more, and maybe the resistance Squall is harboring can come to an end and he can accept the fact that he possibly loves Seifer.

    I'm babbling now, I liked this chapter and please continue!
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  • From ANON - lightning on June 14, 2009
    Wow that was so hot! It's time already that Seifer admits his feelings. I'm so curious as to how much Squall will try to deny his. I also hope that we get to learn more about Squall's past soon!
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  • From on June 06, 2009
    *HAPPY SCREAM* OMG I feel like suuuch a fangirl right now. This chapter was just amazing!! Oh my god I am so surprised with Seifer, but what a wonderful development! I hope you keep on this path and ease it well into the story. I trust you will do a wonderful job.
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  • From Spophaloaf on June 06, 2009
    I think it's quite nice that Seifer's coming to a realisation of his feelings and acting upon them with Squall. It seems they just made love rather than have sex. Although Squall is probably non too aware of this yet, I'm sure Seifer knows he did it this way, and on purpose too.

    It's kinda sweet, but personally I don't think Squall will fall for it too easily or quickly. Seifer needs to show his loving and caring side more first before Squall will let his barriers down fully and embrace him completely.

    I enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for the next one :)
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  • From ANON - LadyPippy on June 05, 2009
    Hi, it's me! I'm just lazy to log in. ;P

    I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Hands down, this is my favorite chapter in the entire story so far. IT WAS PERFECT. ABSOLUTELY, PERFECT, PERFECT, PERFECT!!!

    *sigh*

    I feel so happy for them. Please let that be their happy ending. ;)
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  • From ANON - telyna on June 03, 2009
    i like this story so much please keep updating.
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  • From ANON - crimson on June 03, 2009
    The hotness of this fic kills me
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