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By : Rina76
  • From IntHellsing on December 06, 2008
    I was totally loving it being all about Yazoo [melt] XDD. But no complaints. It's nice to see a bit of bonding between Kadaj and Loz... now that you pointed it out, I guess I did notice their lack of interaction in the past few chapters [they were way too hot for me to realize before. Lol]

    Gah. You drive me crazy. Hahaha.
    Can't wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - schwaerze (too lazy to lock in) on December 06, 2008
    Okay I just wrote an elaborate review and then they had their stupid daily downtime or what and it was GONE! But I´ll see that I get it back together again :)

    Hahaha, Yay for elvish Yazoo! I really like how you managed to draw out Kadaj´s personality! One the one hand he´s that egomanic tyrant and one the other he´s an unsure little boy (a characterisation that is found rather often when it comes to Kadaj), but I think you even go beyond that monochrome pattern and give him a very complexe personality (I mean: your Kadaj can tell Loz that he loves him without having an emotional breakdown and the next moment tease him without appearing OOC: Duh. It´s hard to explain but I hope you get it though.)

    So Loz has a very ambigious hate/love relationsship with Kadaj…. Does that mean he DOES like Yazoo better? (Despite the fact that at the end of the chapter and their VERY funny ‘bickering’ Loz claims that he loves them equally I got the impression that he holds less resentments against Yazoo. But then that´s maybe because, like you said in the AN, Yazoo´s and Loz´relationship was featured on a larger scale…)

    I loved the hints at their past (I´d like to see more of that, given that it fits into the story) and I bet they were so adorable when they were little! (Now I wouldn´t call them 'adorable' any longer... Maybe 'sexy' XD)

    “I didn’t get my first kiss until I was eighteen and even then it was from a whore Kadaj paid to pop my cherry since I was useless with women and couldn’t get any to sleep with me on my own.” This made me laugh because it´s just so blunt and honest, exactly how Loz is :D

    So in short: Awesome chapter and the lack of smut wasn´t ‘tragic’ at all because you gave an interesting and deep insight into Kadaj´s and Loz´ relationship! I´ll patiently waiting for the next chapter!

    (And I´m very inclined to request that Johnny (What?! You don´t know Johnny? Wikipedia says he´s an unimportant sidecharacter so I want him!) pops up now and joins the fun but then I guess this will get a little complicated since Vincent already pushed his way into the story and… Gawd, just DON´T listen, you´re doing a great job as it is! XD)

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  • From Kuragari75 on December 06, 2008
    lol, oh all right, we'll stop going on about your evil cliffies. Anyway, I really did like this chapter. I think you portray all of them very well and their interactions. All of Loz's insecurities are well thought out and explained in ways that they'd probably be ones he actually has. ^^ I love Yazoo and Kadaj teasing Loz and how long it takes him to catch on. It's so cute... and very endearing. The way you write them interacting I think is very true to their bond and they're all very much in character. Well can't wait to read more!
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  • From IntHellsing on December 05, 2008
    Woah. ...I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Ravenlyn on November 18, 2008
    Well there's one thing I learned from how you write your story, it's the simple fact that you have us coming back for more, leave the chapter in a crucial point so the reader goes "WTF why end it there I wanna know what's gonna happen next!!" and that way you'll make a popular story. I should try that for the original stuff I plan to write one of these days. Well, at least you aren't taking months on end to update now. YAY! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Blazing Malice on November 17, 2008
    Wow... That was good, write more please, you just got to the good part! xD I loved it xxxxxxxxxxx
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  • From schwaerze on November 17, 2008
    Haha, my god, how big IS Loz?! Poor guy XD And his detailed describtions were so sweet. I also like Loz´ 'dark side', he´s a Sephiroth remnant after all! So in short: great chapter and I´ll patiently wait for more :)
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  • From Kerianya on November 16, 2008
    Heh heh...you don't have to rush the next chapter. It's always been worth the wait, be that wait a day or a month long. Sooo, no hate mail for you my dear!

    Love as always,

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From ANON - Ravenlyn on November 11, 2008
    OMG You did it again! And yes I'll be back. When I saw there was an update, I was like YAY! Finally! But now I'm like...yay she did it again, now I have to wait for a month for part six. T_T Well we all work at our own pace! I'm looking forward to the next part.
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  • From ANON - juri on November 09, 2008
    Oh. My. God. I can't believe you ended the chapter there! That's pretty evil, and I've seen my share of fanfic-evil, heh. It was getting to new levels of hot. I'm hoping the next chapter will be worth the wait and Loz will give Yazoo what he wants and then some! ;) Loz's view of Yazoo is just lovely. Gah, makes me love Loz/Yazoo so much! And I have read Emerald Ember's Secrecy (great fic), I loved the bit you threw in there! XD
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  • From on November 08, 2008
    Hot.
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  • From Kerianya on November 07, 2008
    BWA?!? You can't stop THERE! That's...like...the most evil cliffie of the most sinfully delicious chapter thus far! Is there no end to this wonder that is your literary skill? I'm in such envy.

    This chapter was so delicate and beautiful, yet so wonderfully delicious as to be sinful. It's a rare talent that can achieve that, and now I'll start my weekend with a smile.

    Your ever-eager fangirl,

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From vivarose on October 07, 2008
    Woohoo and update! Nice touches you have there ;)
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  • From on October 07, 2008
    Very good. Very sexy.
    I usually don't like stories in "first person" because I find writers hardly get characters in character as often...but you did an amazing job and now I can't wait to read more so I hope you can update soon.
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  • From Raiast on September 25, 2008
    This was a really really sweet chapter, and the connection between Yazoo and Loz here makes my heart hurt. =)
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