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Reviews for Fatality I: Teasing

By : writeright
  • From Leonhart29 on December 16, 2006
    Okay - on to the next one. I'm hooked - good job!
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  • From ANON - sayge on February 21, 2005
    is...is that it...? WTF?! You have to finish this fic! It just CANT end at chapter 12!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
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  • From ANON - The Evil Spastic Bitch on December 30, 2004
    *sob* That was sad. Really good story, well written. Damn Squall... now I wanna keel him... anyway, you did great... I want a sequal! V___V
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  • From ANON - Dragoness Kirra on December 04, 2004
    wow.......that was uberly fantastic....is there anymore or does it stop at chapter 12? ...i love this story...
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  • From ANON - lonelywolf on September 01, 2004
    A good sad conclusion to the end of your story. Hope you write more ff8 fanfics.
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  • From ANON - KittyMeowMaxwell on September 01, 2004
    Oh! That was so good! It's sad that they didn't end up together, but I won't hate you for it! At least you didn't kill one of them. *has done that* It was a very beautiful fic. I did very much enjoy it.

    ~Kitty.
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  • From ANON - astraleora on August 26, 2004
    excellent. that pretty much sums it up.

    as much as i would have loved to see squall go get him i agree that for this story at least it would have been in compleate contradiction to his feelings through the story.

    I thought the plot was very well thought out and even found myself near tears for irvine towards the end.

    all in all i love it and hope to read more from you.

    xastrax
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  • From ANON - hopemia on August 25, 2004
    Oh the angst.

    I loved it and hated it at the same time.... Squall does have alot of pride when it comes to his emotions.

    But, I can't agree to the comment at the end of chapter 12. I think Squall could stsy in a relationship.. but, his partner would have to be very understanding. He's too insecure and scared of being cast aside to do anything in a rush. I mean, look at him jumping after Rinoa in space. He was so desperate to have her with him that he went through Hell and back for her.

    I still liked the story though. Poor Irvy, he shouldn't have demanded those things from Squall.. but, it's understandable.

    And, Squall... so afraid of risking his heart.

    Sad, soo sad.
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  • From ANON - ray on August 24, 2004
    Hey that story was very good you should try to write an sequel to the fanfic to see if squall goes with Irvine or not and so forth.
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  • From ANON - darkangel_tdK on August 20, 2004
    NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!

    Poor Irvine! All down to Squall's pride! The B*****d! I'm not happy now! That's a sad very disappointing ending. :(

    It is well written tho! Any hope for a sequel where he tracks Irvine down???


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  • From ANON - s and s blah on August 17, 2004
    I'm back miss me have been on for a while, but I just read the chapter 11 and thought it was wonderful.
    Chapter 12 should be great as well. I can't wait to see if Squall will follow after Irvine(I sure hope so).

    Any way please keep the great and wonderful piece of art coming and I will be back to read it.

    Thanks for the entertainment

    s and s blah
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  • From on August 04, 2004
    heheheh what was I gonna go on about now ..... o.o OI fergot already ..... damn well um... I'm glad you continued it rather quickly :3 because I like the story.... In fact XD I wrote my own and it's up heheheh oh the inspiration x.x As for me, if you're trying to get me sad about it, I can't say it'll completely work because I'm a terrible person :P I laugh at Irvines bitterness o.o' don't even as why .... ANYWAY it's good ^ ^ you definately need to keep going :>
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  • From ANON - Naniris on August 04, 2004
    I think that the lyrics fit nicely with the overall tone of this chapter. The next chapter is the last one, right?

    I like how it could go either way, if Irvine's ultimatum is enough to break Squall out of his shell, or if it'll blow up in the cowboy's face.
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  • From ANON - Koji Nokemono on July 31, 2004
    yaaaaay Irvine x Squall pairings :> my favorite kind XD I like the way it's written too because of the indivuality idea kinda, with reasonings ...... it's hard to say but yeah :P when I first started reading, I though the way of writing was a little odd, but then again I'm not the one writing it. *shakes head* i can't explain it x.x oh well, update soon and I'll checkback soon or sumin ^ ^
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  • From ANON - Shikami on July 30, 2004
    Wow...
    This was amazing, and I only read the first chapter! Yre gre gifted. Really. I just had to stop myself after the first chapter to leave a review. You can bet that I will try and read everything you write. ^_^ I am now your loyal fan. Hahaha-cough-hahaha.
    ~Shikami
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