Reviews for Just another day of training

BY : Shehanitan


  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on February 06, 2005

    yey, can't wait for the next chapter. This is such a great story. ^-^

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  • From ANON - Nate on January 20, 2005

    Nice descriptions, your fic is hot.

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  • From ANON - Firenze1 on January 20, 2005

    Interesting story. It was very well written and the detail is well done. You have done an excellent job on this one. keep it up and write a follow-up chapter to this one.

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  • From ANON - fukuyami on December 20, 2004

    wow nice! you had me cracking up with those spelling errors lol but it was good nonetheless!
    nibbles!? lmao!

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  • From ANON - Dadella on December 20, 2004

    That was pretty good!!
    grammar blah blah blah

    *heh*

    I'd've personally liked it, if Squall wasn't all bent outta shape about it in the end, like, instead of crying, he liked it, or something...
    but that's just me...

    You might want to put that it's non/con in your description...

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  • From ANON - Guenhwyvar on December 19, 2004

    Not bad, except for the typos. Not a combination I've seen before. But please add NON-CON to the summary, not everyone wants to read it.

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