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Reviews for Defining Love

By : DB2020
  • From ANON - A on October 28, 2008
    Okay, I just read this in one sitting and god, this story is beyond amazing. I really like how different this story is from your other (dare I say it) masterpieces (protecting the lion & its sequel) but still as good, if not better -- I like that you're patient with the characters, not rushing them to jump into the twu wuv 4eva asap but actually taking time to develop their characterizations. And seriously, you write the best foreplay/kissing/sex scenes. I look forward to reading future updates from this wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Akira on October 28, 2008
    Had to change my e-mail cause it locked me out of my account. Anyways on with the review. So the next chapter is about sex again? Hmm, oh well. I cannot wait until there are more Seifer/Lore interactions. :D I totally love those even though there are only a handful so far.
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  • From angelofinnocence on October 26, 2008
    *sighs* I've had my fix. I'll live for another few weeks. Please update again soon. I love this fic.
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  • From ANON - asialisek on October 26, 2008
    ;_; cruel............ splitting in 1/2.. **whimpers**

    I'm SO SO SO glad you won't disappear! School comes first, fangirlz second. :D I don't mind.
    A sweet, mild chapter were we get a little more into the possibility of some kind of truce between Seifer and Lore. **nods nods** And tension~ lol. oooooooooooooh.. sooo long to way for x-mas~~~~~ **wobbles** soooo loooong... but I'll wait, we'll all wait!
    THANKS!!!!
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  • From angelofinnocence on October 20, 2008
    Ugh! I want more. I just reread it for like the twelfth time. I think I need another hobby besides reading fanfiction. All I can say is that I will be impatiently awaiting updates on this fic and I hope that they will come sooner, but I know how busy life can be, so I hope you get the time to continue soon.
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  • From barrsa on October 15, 2008
    I'm so in love with this story! I can't wait to read more :D
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  • From ANON - asialisek on October 14, 2008
    sooooooooooooooo **passionate~~~~~~~~ X9 **re-reads again**
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  • From ANON - asialisek on October 09, 2008
    sooooooooooooooo passionate~ **goes to re-read again**
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  • From ANON - axehole on October 06, 2008
    hmmm.. sorry i draw a fanart pic, and i named it after yer fic protecting the lion... and its for you. so... gah.. this is hard to do... *gets on his knees* Please continue this fic! I'M BLOODY HOOKED LIKE A DRUG ADDICT!! *grhm*.... so the pic is here: http://axehole.deviantart.com/art/Protecting-The-Lion-100017927 if you want to see how i rape ff characters
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  • From ANON - telyna on October 06, 2008
    please please please continue this story. there are so little good ones out there anymore.
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  • From ANON - lawchan on September 23, 2008
    CMON! Update!
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  • From ANON - asialisek on September 18, 2008
    hello hello DB2020-san~

    I'm not here to nag. *shakes head* no no. I wanted to lend support if I could. Since I discovered your fictions, I've become an instant-o-fan. Today, you came up in an ongoing discussion I was having with Sukunami-san Title Pending. We were worried that updates are happening less frequently, and that things in the real world *this being all speculation* are taking priority.. which .. really is how things are supposed to be. BUT, we, and I, wanted to express that we LOVE LOVE your stories, your take on SxS, your talent for expressing them and the WAY you write are WONDERFUL.

    I hope hope hope that you'll come back to us (the fans) and share again soon. We ALL look forward to an update, but most importantly, for your take on SxS fandomness. We miss you~ and not just for the sweets ya give us, but BECAUSE it is you that is giving us those sweets~ lol~ makes it all the sweeter. :)

    chap.39 comments --
    I was thinking.. where 39 leads of, and because the relationship btw Seifer and Squall is escalating.. I was thinking it'd be interesting if a real conflict arose, as such a possible new sorceress or some war or not.... with the way things are going for them, it would be great to see how they take their new found relationship and apply it to the style of the mercenary world. ............................... of course.. i have an ulterior motive for suggesting a new sorceress............................................. i mean.. Squall is still young enough... and.. Lore.. needs to learn to share anyway.. lol **wiggling eyebrow suggestive //which'is'somewhat'uncoordinated'and'disturbing** I hope you have a clue as to what I'm hinting at. No way is this my story, *pouts* but since you don't have an LJ or blog, we're clueless as to what's goin' on and thus, IF it is a possible writers block, I'd like to throw some stuff out there. I totally can't even predict what you have in mind.. which makes the anticipation all the sweeter.
    **sweet tooth AND hopeless romantic combo**
    XD
    Please take care!
    And come back to us IF and WHEN you can!!!!!! WE MISS YOOOOOOOOOOOU!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zodiac Eclipse on September 03, 2008
    Wow that was a long chapter, and it was great. All the best elements of story and smut mixed into one surperb serving. I hope you'll consider getting another one up soon, I've been following this story forever and can't wait to see how Lore and Seifer interact in the next chapter.

    -ZE
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  • From ANON - anon on August 26, 2008
    such great story! Thanks for con
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  • From Araea Swiftwind on August 19, 2008
    Well, this story is really good so far. I rather enjoy it. I have spent the last three days reading, and it was definately worth my time. My only big issue is in some word choice. You constantly refer to Seifer with the same title. "Ex-knight". After thirty-nine chapters, it gets really redundant and starts grating on nerves. And, if it isn't "ex-knight", then it is "rival", or "the blonde man". But really, there are only three main things you call Seifer. And Squall. "Leonhart" gets really redundant too. And, for him, if it isn't "Leonhart", then it is "rival". You don't use brunette very often, which is okay, but the word choice needs to be mixed up a bit more. Other than that, the only real mistakes are in grammar. The spelling is faulty sometimes, and articles are frequently missing. All of these are simple errors that happen, and don't really detract from the story. The only thing you should worry about is the bad word choice.
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