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By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - YACUMO on March 06, 2010
    Long time no see!! It is nice that you have updated. In the past I told you I found it quite shocking and disturbing that a person could write such violent scenes (raping), but anyway, I tried really really hard just to ignore them and see what was going to happen in the story, and finally that damn torment has ended. My gosh, lol, almost didnīt finish huh?
    I am glad that finally Squall was saved by Seifer, and I also fancy the idea that Seifer admited he loved Squall.....now we need Squall to admit it too. Frigging kill Seiferīs brother, and that puny son of his. I really detest those characters. In this case I really donīt care how gore you want to be.... just dissapear them LOL.

    Hope to read from you soon, and also hope to see how are you going to mend the relationship; sexual and sentimental, in between your characters.

    I also hope you update your other sotries too. Chiao
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2010
    Why haven't you updated in so long?!
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  • From ANON - Shiroro formerly known as Akano on February 21, 2010
    ARGH! Sitting here and waiting for you to updaaate .___. it's so exciting right now I can't get your story out of my mind! I want to know what will happen and the little clue you gave about the ending is making me even more curious!

    You said that everyone probably will "hate your guts" about the ending but, if I may say so myself, the fact that you have those guts is one of the reasons why I love your stories so much. You keep crossing a line that many doesn't dare to cross which takes your stories events to a whole new level and I enjoy that alot :D

    Keep up the awesome work and don't give up!
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  • From ANON - Dekorx on January 26, 2010
    GAH! I really hope that Squall gets rescued in the next chapter, Seraph is sadistic and.. bah, I really hope you update soon! lol :P I love this story XD
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  • From ANON - Monet on January 26, 2010
    I didn't think that Seraph would meet Seifer in this chapter or that he would mentally torture squall. I thought this chapter was all physical punishment! but hey I like this either way! I bet there is so trick to this getting Squall back. Seraph seems to be starting to like Squall alot more (not in a good way) if seraph is as bad as i think he is, its going to be harder for Squall and seifer to reunited...i hope i see the result of serano's stupidity and lust....i wonder what's he going to do to Squall???
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  • From ANON - angrylighting on January 25, 2010
    Ok, that was a good chapter, even though I didn't like the blood scene at all and well I preferred it having been much less and Seraph being with Squall a lot more. I liked the interaction between Seraph and Seifer. I'm not expecting Seraph to go down easily at all, and maybe Squall have been so scared after that he'll choose Seraph over Seifer for the evening? Or he'll be totally broken. I'm thinking that Seraph will want to keep Squall or meet him again. Hope so but I do want the bastard to go down. But on time. Overall, good work but I wanted more spotlight on Squall :-p I really want to see what happens next, please update soon.
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  • From arsenicstings on January 21, 2010
    The more intense you make get torture scene and the more you describe how Squall is being scared by it, the more I presume he's going to be traumatized once he gets out. And I don't expect him to fall lovingly into Seifer's arms anymore. I expect that he'd run as far away from the Almasy family as he could, because as long as Seraph is alive and he's affiliated with Seifer, there's always the possibility, or at least the fear that he'd end up prisoner to Seraph again. And I know Squall is smart enough to make that connection. I want Seifer to be punished. He shouldn't get off easy for being a dumbass in the first place and allowing Squall to get captured by his psychopath brother. But I'm sure that's where you were headed with this anyway... ^.^ Look forward to more soon!
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  • From DracoDormiens on January 20, 2010
    Yikes...now Squall has the horrific death of the maid as another burden on his mind. D: Great job on that scene though! *shudders*
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  • From ANON - lightning on December 21, 2009
    O M G!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked this chapter so much! I want to see what will happen with Seifer and of course (duh!) Squall! I liked the character (as of yet) of the really old guy. The experience in him and the way you can't seem to catch him off guard. I think he'll like Squall because he's a person that doesn't give in easily and very stubborn. I can't wait to see what will happen with Seraph and Squall. Of course I'd like Seraph to start becoming obsessed with Squall but well I'll wait and see. I hope Teo appears soon again, I like him! I want to read more so much I'm tempted to ask of he next chapter as a Christmas present (didn't I ask that in a way now? lol) but Christmas is in four days and I know we shouldn't press you and stuff. But I have to admit I'm kinda scared about what will follow as Squall's punishment, I hope Seraph forgives him soon? Please update as soon as you can, excellent chapter.
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  • From ANON - dekorx on December 21, 2009
    livejournal? there aren't a lot of popular places that you could post your stories, because it's NC-17. I hope you find one though!
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  • From DracoDormiens on December 20, 2009
    Ahhh...that was freakin' intense. Love the chase scene. Squall is in so much shit for that stunt, I'm sure! Poor thing...and he has to endure three more chapters with them? *gulp*
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  • From ANON - Monet on December 20, 2009
    hey..i have this weird habit of reading people's reviews and I read the one by Ravenesque(he/she has no appreciation for your story)...and i hope u don't get offended/angry/upset or sad enough to stop writting it to the end(every writer has critics even JK Rowling!)..cause i love this one story but the author took too many flames and never continued it...about the three chapters and sqeuel does this mean you have this whole saga written out??? can u answer my question in your next chapter??
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  • From ANON - Ravenesque on December 20, 2009
    i've been reading this story for a while and one of the problems i had with it in the beginning (and still do) was the sefier/squall non-con/con relationship they had. seifer comes in and coerces him into sex. coercion is not okay. it's still rape. just b/c squall says no at first but then later is writhing in seifer's arms b/c seifer just makes him feel so good is just an excuse to keep doing what you're writing. squall still says no, but seifer doesn't stop with the sexual advances and persists anyway. and eventually squall falls in love with him and that makes everything else okay. I get kink, i get rough sex, i get that there is non-con roleplay. but this is story is just...no. whatever you were trying to accomplish with that is very skewed and i don't know if you understand that.
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  • From IntHellsing on December 19, 2009
    Oh Ah. For the record.
    self_torture_loser@hotmail.com

    There. Let me know if you jump ship.
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  • From ANON - IntHellsing on December 19, 2009
    Oh noes! Three more chapters of them!? How can I take it!?
    If this were an actual book... I'd be fighting tooth and nail to keep from flipping to the end to make sure it all turns out okay. Haha.
    Normally I don't care. Normally I'm a tragedy mongerer. Foaming at the mouth like "Yesssss. Separate them! Torture them! Kill one them!" But for some reason I'm really hoping this one has a happy(ish) ending.

    If you find somewhere else to write, do me a huge favor and please be sure and drop me an email or something letting me know where I can find you. K?
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