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Reviews for Shadows within darkness

By : schwaerze
  • From ANON - Lamica on July 25, 2009
    Sephiroth... *Swoons* Yes I did enjoy this chapter and Hojo... *Fans self* I have a big infatuation with him as well xD I guess as far as Vincent/Lucrecia het; I say go for it. ^_^ It's not like it's going to burn our brains or anything, I'm sure we've all read het fic one time or another. ♥
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  • From ANON - Seira on July 23, 2009
    personaly i would rather not read any vin/lu

    but i love you writing please keep it up ^^
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  • From ANON - Sillhouttegirl on July 23, 2009
    I haven't read many fanfics lately, cause they all seem to disappoint me greatly. However, your Shadows within Darkness, I adore it so much!!!! >.< You're a genius I cannot wait till chapter 41.
    And btw
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on July 14, 2009
    You hadme worrying a little there.but still I can't shake the feeling the bitch ain't finished with them yet.
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  • From ANON - darkmorgainelefay (Chephren) on July 13, 2009
    Hey Love!!

    I love the way this chapter went! That last scene where Lu got kicked to the curb was absolutely badass!! XD I am so glad Vin came around... I felt so bad for poor Yaz, but I loved that he stood up and was the voice of reason here. Thank you for posting! This story is fantastic. TTYL!! *glomps*
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  • From ANON - Lamica on July 12, 2009
    Haha, she got served. *Snickers* Two gil says she's going to run back to Sephiroth. *Swoon* I want to see him again... oh well xD D: I want more though! Please say you'll update soon? :3 ♥ I'm greedy.
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  • From Rina76 on July 12, 2009
    About frickin' time you came to your senses, Vince! *cheering from the sidelines here* Seriously, who in their right mind would choose that selfish harpy over gorgeous little Yazoo? I'm glad to see Vincent is not /that/ stupid.

    I think I was gloating over her departure almost as much as Yazoo was. Heh. Good riddance, bitch! *slams the door loudly after her*

    Wow, finally a chapter where something /good/ happens at the end! No nasty cliffhanger for once. Now I am really curious to hear Vincent's story as I'm sure it's a terrific one. Will it end with sex, like Yazoo's version of fairytales? lol

    (Btw, I can't believe this is the 40th chapter! You've done some incredible work on this fic, huh? Is there still a lot to go or are you getting near the finish? I will be sad to see it end but know it must one day)
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  • From Rina76 on July 03, 2009
    No. No! NO! Don't...don't leave! :( You two belong together!

    What the hell is wrong with Vincent? It's like he's got no balls anymore. I liked him with balls. He's been castrated by a meddling, interfering wench, that's what's happened. Grr, hate her even more now. Especially after what she said to Yazoo, how she insulted him right to his face. Bitch. *makes cranky expression*

    Damn. Guess the Botox isn't working.

    Great update, though! ^__^ Yazoo is a smart little cookie. He knows /exactly/ what's going on. Too bad Vincent is too thick-headed to realise it. Ah well, he'll soon learn his lesson. *nods primly*

    (btw, can I quit my job and become a student like you? Maybe then I'd get some more updates done. *sighs heavily and feels like a failure*)

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  • From ANON - Lamica on June 29, 2009
    ;~; Yazoo ♥

    Dammit Vincent... *Kicks him* xD Loved this update, can't wait till you update again. ^,^ ♥
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  • From ANON - Lamica on June 16, 2009
    ^,^ I'm sure you can do it! You just need to act it out in your head that's all. I don't remember if I reviewed this yet, but I love the angst and the tension in this chapter. I can't wait, of course for your next update; hope it's sometime soon if you can get over your block :3 ♥
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  • From Rina76 on June 13, 2009
    Well, you promised drama and you certainly didn't disappoint! Vincent hugging her was a surprise and kind of touching for an aloof creature like him. Didn't think he'd do something like that so it shows how much feeling he still has for her. Her reaction to finding out about Yazoo & Vincent's relationship was interesting. Makes me wonder what she really wants and why she's really there. She's so hiding something. She might act all nice and innocent, just wanting to see an old friend, but someone like her would totally have an agenda up their sleeve.

    Yazoo's reaction was to be expected. More cold jealousy and I can't say I blame him. What's with all these people from Vincent's past just dropping in unannounced? Haven't they heard of sending a letter first? Or a telegram? Hell, even a courier pigeon would be helpful. lol

    Poor boy though, getting dragged out of the room and having a door shut in his face. No wonder he's worried. And pissed.

    My favourite line is this: "Actually Vincent appreciates my beauty very much and on a rather regular basis too..." Haha, go Yaz! *cheers* Put that bitch in her place, yo. (sorry, had to say that in Reno-voice for some reason XD)

    Well-described update with lots of conflicting emotions from all the parties concerned. Knowing you, I suspect the conflict is only going to increase dramatically from here and I have a strange feeling Yazoo might get terribly hurt somewhere along the line. :( I dunno how you keep the tension up in this fic but that's one of your skills and it's what makes us keep hanging on your every precisely-written word! Ack, too much drama! *needs Botox to smooth out worry lines on forehead*

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  • From IntHellsing on June 11, 2009
    Ugh! What a bastard!
    /too mad at Vincent to comment about anything else.
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  • From Rina76 on June 07, 2009
    Ooooo, that was /great/. So very, very toe-curlingly sexy and HOT. You write these two together just perfectly. I love the thought of Yazoo begging so desperately and wow, he should talk more during sex because he comes up with great twisted fairytales! (I still giggle remembering the alternate ending he once created, about the prince and the princess going back to the castle to bang lol)

    *sighs in foreboding and mentally prepares self for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on June 06, 2009
    Mmmm, I love it when Vincent makes Yazoo purr. Thank you, a little better, but my son's been off school for two days and we have a long weekend this weekend. So I'm working on the next, Revealations. Hopeful to finish tomorrow or monday. Did I tell you I have an old unfinshed Sentinel story called Shadows In The Darkness?
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  • From Ringwen on June 06, 2009
    YAY FOR SMEEEX!! XD Great sexy chapter hunny! ^.~ *glomp*
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