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Reviews for Shadows within darkness

By : schwaerze
  • From LamicaLee on April 17, 2009
    I swear I resemble the Cheshire cat with the way I'm grinning right now. xD It's like 2:30am and I had to keep from squealing out like the fangirl I am. *Swoon* I ♥ Sephiroth and I ♥ you for putting him in there. Of course I ♥ this story, can't wait for the next installment! :3
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  • From IntHellsing on April 16, 2009
    Oh I'm so excited! I hoped it was Sephie from your last teaser.
    Ohhh. This is so not good for poor Yaz... an evil man like that could tempt him into doing all the dark things Vincent keeps him from doing. Like going on a feeding frenzy since he's never satisfied with one person. >> Ohh. I hope poor Yazzie doesn't end up finding out anything too horrible from him!
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  • From Ringwen on April 15, 2009
    My my...! I just can't get enough of your fics!! Gosh..I could just go on an praise you for another 3 weeks..!
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on April 15, 2009
    Happy little Fyr, I need a fan now, too bad I put mine away, guess I'll survive -- until I read some more... please ;) begs...
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  • From IntHellsing on April 15, 2009
    Hahahah. Rufus watching them fuck would go great in 'a wedding'... ::waits hopefully::

    The idea of Yaz feeding from Rufus is so sexy. xDD
    I'm glad that's what was happening.
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  • From LamicaLee on April 13, 2009
    *Crosses fingers* Please be Sephiroth, please be Sephiroth. x3 I love this story even more now. ♥ Keep up the wonderful work and I'll definitely keep reading. This story is very addicting. ;D
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  • From Rina76 on April 11, 2009
    Cute fanart too. ^__^
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  • From Rina76 on April 11, 2009
    Hey, what? Loz and Kadaj are DEAD? Uh...when did that happen? And how? *thinks very hard* The last I remember of them in this fic was when Vincent showed up and took dying Yazoo away. Kadaj was screaming and Reno and Loz had just arrived with the healer. And then there was that little dream where they were all together but I don't recall you describing their deaths. *makes puzzled face* Did I miss a chapter or something? Please explain because I'm very confused here...

    But these two updates were great. I enjoy Cloud's reappearances, even though he causes so much trouble for the vampires! I understand why he's hell-bent on revenge but it was very generous of Vincent to let him live. The poor bloodhound, though... :(

    I loved the bit in the tomb where they were just talking and quietly being together. Vincent was so caring. It was so nice to see. Yazoo's idea was a brilliant one and yes, rather Anne Rice-y. ^__^ Sounds good but making it work, obviously, is a lot harder than it seems. Of course people are going to notice odd things about them. I enjoyed the teasing banter between Vincent and Yazoo in the bedroom before the party, how affectionate they've become with each other.

    The bit about Denzel was so funny! lol And I bet Yazoo has tons of admirers. He plays the carefree charmer so exceptionally well. He's a brilliant actor and an even better liar. He's got everyone fooled. Well, almost everyone.

    Am eager to see what Rufus /really/ wants... Oh, the intrigue is killing me!
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  • From ANON - lijana on April 04, 2009
    Hi there. I just discovered this fic and I have read it ALL!!!

    I never thought of it before but I think you are making me like the idea of VincentxYazoo.

    I am wondering with ch 30, if Rufus has his own little Vamp army of Turks! LOL!

    I look forward tot he next chapter
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  • From IntHellsing on April 03, 2009
    Just because of how Rufus is... I can't help but suspect he either wants to recruit them to do his dirty work... or he wants to fuck one or both of them and/or watch them fuck.
    Hahahaha. I'm probably way off... but I just can't expect that Rufus would ever -not- be up to something sick and/or twisted.
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  • From LamicaLee on March 24, 2009
    As always, love what's been going on so far! Though I can't help but be reminded of Lestat and Louie for some reason. Hmmm... xD It was like a moment from Interview with the Vampire. If you haven't read the Vampire Chronicles I highly recommend them~! :3 Can't wait to see how they pass off in society, I will anxiously be awaiting your next installment of this fic! ♥
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  • From Rina76 on March 22, 2009
    BTW, the link to the fanart pic isn't working. :(
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  • From Rina76 on March 22, 2009
    Eeeep! Yazoo's been sprung alive. Uh...I mean, dead. I mean...you know what I mean. He's still around and he shouldn't be. And now people know. This just opens up a whole new can of worms, eh? Sooner or later the word is going to reach Kadaj and Loz, who are still probably trying to go on with life without their beloved brother. I'm really looking forward to the night when they all meet again. I love Yazzie being with Vincent but I still think the boys all belong together. *sighs in wistfulness*

    And Cloud is STILL on the same mission to rid the world of devils. Will he ever stop? He's like some spiky-haired Van Helsing.

    I am greatly enjoying the drama with the bloodthirsty mob and the crumbling ruins and secret escapes! It's like an old atmospheric Dracula movie. You have a knack for taking the reader into the surrounds and scenery, making us feel as though we are really there watching, seeing, smelling and hearing everything. Only a good writer can do that. *points to you*

    But I feel so bad for Yazoo right now. He's not evil. Not really. He can't help what he is now and a dead guy's gotta survive. It just so happens that he needs blood to do that. I know he's a killer now but inside he's still the same sweet boy he used to be. *kisses his injured hand and offers him my neck to feed from*

    I think with this fic you're making me fall deeper in love with Yazoo than I have ever been before. Damn you. Loz is gonna get jealous. ;)
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  • From IntHellsing on March 19, 2009
    Cloud should really learn to let things go. What a bastard.
    Poor thing. I hope they don't get too torn up in their escape.

    Grrr. I'm so mad at Cloud for this! [xD]
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  • From Rina76 on March 15, 2009
    I'm sitting here softly swearing to myself because that was so effin' hot! Just outstanding, girl. Vamps getting it on just after feeding is so brutally delicious and messy and feral and just...*growls lustily* I love the vamp sex. And I especially loved this part:

    "Vincent was still deep inside his lover, lying heavily on the teens heavenly body, his face nestled into the curve of Yazoo´s neck, eyes closed and his black hair spilling over their figures. Yazoo was lying underneath him, legs spread on either side of his master, back still arched and head thrown back, as he was still trapped in the aftermath of their fucking."

    Gods. What a gorgeous, gorgeous image. I want an oil painting of that. A life size one. I can just see them all bloody and scratched and bitten but not caring because they know they'll heal very quickly. One of the great things about being an immortal. You can't ruin Yazoo's pure white skin. Not for long anyway!

    The sex you've written has always been hot as hell but now that they're both vampires the hotness level has just gone waaaaay up! In fact, my thermometer just busted so you owe me a new one. lol

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