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Reviews for To Trust A Cop

By : Shehanitan
  • From ANON - A big fan on August 13, 2016

    Hot hot hot. This is seriously the hottest, steamiest FF fanfic there is. *nosebleed*


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  • From ANON - Nunya Biz on January 26, 2016
    I have to say that this is the last chapter I'm going to read. I'm actually not even going to finish the chapter because I'm just done.


    Your portrayal of Squall, Seifer,and even Irvine is so one-sided that I can't continue with this story. I'll get to the point - you have made Squall into such a wimpy punk that I'm surpised the sleazy landlord hasn't bent him over the closest chair already . Not to have any backbone when it comes to standing behind his decision to not have sex in the hospital-I mean give me a break-if I had said no and someone still put their hands on me, you better damn believe that I'd have yelled the ceiling down.And the fact that neither Seifer nor Irvine care nor respect Squall's wishes just makes them mindless horny bullies. What makes them any different from Craig,except for the fact that they're pretty? I know Seifer is arrogant and has an ego the size of a small planet, but he's got more going for him than just a big dick. Squall's token resistance is laughable at least and highly annoying at most. I was hoping for a little more depth the longer this sequel got, but I'm tired of the same plot dressed up in mildy different wording-Seifer shows up uninvited, Squall says no to him, Seifer forces himself on Squall and he gives in. Boring after the hundredth time..
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2012
    Hey, I was just re-reading this story and I thought you might want to know that your chapter formatting has been totally screwed it. It's actually really difficult to read now since it reads as one huge paragraph. Just thought you might want to know so that you could fix it.

    take care, and I'm looking forward to an update for 'To Love a Cop'

    Anon
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  • From ANON - Abi on May 12, 2011
    I just finished the story, I went forever trying not to, and to read it as slow as possible because I absolutly did not want it to end.. I love it I love them all and I believe if I'm not mistaken a forth chapter has just been added *runs off to read* YOUR THE BEST! sQUUE LETS GET MARRIED AND WE CAN HAVE LITTLE SEIFER AND SQUALL FICLETS! .. I kid but I truely love this work it's amazing please keep my habbit supplied
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  • From ANON - DevilishSiren on March 29, 2011
    LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE
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  • From ANON - anon on November 07, 2010
    just re-read this story again. LOVE IT! but my question to you is when will the sequel be posted? you mentioned at the very end that it would be sometime this year, and yet this year is almost over. :(

    Please please post it soon! I'm running out of good stories to read!

    Anon
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  • From ANON - lightning on August 27, 2010
    Personally, I think this was a very nice "ending!" I really liked what Leon did in the end, your description and I loved the last phrase! Of course this is not really the ending, I can't wait to read the first chap of "To Love a Cop." I'm looking forward to it!
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  • From ANON - rin kagamine on August 03, 2010
    hoe?! am i too late to review this story? i hope no.. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! everything seems almost real to me.. anyway, you will make a sequel, right right? *kitten eyes* i'll wait for it. but if it's possible, don't make me wait too long ok? good luck!
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  • From KarelaTheRedHawk on June 23, 2010
    wow i thought that was really good. it was powerful and filled with emotion. i really cannot wait for your sequel.
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  • From ANON - Cerin on June 23, 2010
    Er, what I mean is, "daddy" is really the very LAST person I want to be thinking about when I'm reading something like this, you know? ^^; Sorry if my first comment sounded too negative.
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  • From ANON - Cerin on June 23, 2010
    Your lemons are really hot... but Seifer referring to himself as "daddy" and having Squall call him that is really... disturbing/nauseating to me. And in every single scene! Instant mood-killer. T_T I'm so sad that I have to miss out on all this, I just can't get past that. Am I the only one??

    *deflates*
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  • From ANON - DWC on June 06, 2010
    Don't get me wrong; I LOVE the story, but yeah...it needs a beta. It would be a lot of work (52 chapters!). Words like though, tough, thought, and through are totally mixed up making it often difficult to discern what a particular sentence means without having to make some damn good use of context clues, and that's just one example. I am treating this as a REAL review and not an "ZOMG! I luv ur ficcie!"-fest *shudders*. The story is GREAT even though you said it's smut with plot, and the lemons are SWEET (lol). It just needs some major editing.


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  • From ANON - Luke on April 20, 2010
    WHAT. WHAT. WHAT. WHAT. WHAT.
    I WANT TO KNOW WHAT ELSE HAPPENS.
    NO FAIR. NO FREAKIN' FAIR, MAN.
    HURRY UP AND WRITE THE NEXT STORY. I... GAH. I WANT MORREEEEE T_T.


    on a slightly more lucid note, oh my god that was amazing.
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  • From ANON - chamorrican56 on April 15, 2010
    I have been a silent viewer for a long time. All the way back to Cops Can't Be Trusted. So this time i wanted to say something to you, thank you. Thank you so much for taking your time to write and post this wonderful story. I have enjoyed it since the very beginning and I have even gotten some of my friends into it.
    This story, despite all the warnings and such, has been able to keep me company [and sane] throughout the years. Please don't ever stop writing. I would be at such a loss, haha. I will try and wait patiently for the third installment! So until then, i read and re-read the rest of your wonderful stories, haha.

    thank you again,

    chamorrican56
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  • From ANON - dekorx on April 11, 2010
    Awesome, love it. Ending was emotional, and I was surprised that Seifer sent Squall alone. I'm excited to find out what happens! Please, post the new story soon! haha
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