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By : schwaerze

From ANON - Lamica on May 31, 2009
>:3 Glad to see you've updated. Sorry to hear that you haven't been feeling well. *Feeds soup* Hope things start looking up for you. ^,^. You know I loved this chapter, of course I did. And the little mini-story too xD Can't wait for your next update as I'll be anxiously awaiting to see what you have in store next. ♥
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From Rina76 on May 19, 2009
Ha, yes, I definitely saw the humour! Yazoo with a cushion in his face, calmly announcing she was dead and Vincent catching them like that. In a weird way it was almost like brother/sister behaviour. ...Ew. I shall not be thinking /that/ again!

And Yazoo getting ragingly jealous of Vincent's past lovers always brings a smile to my face! ^__^ Yes, they need more alone time, I think... Yazoo embracing Vincent from behind makes me want more of that sweet hugginess.

(BTW, if anyone can make me like pre-wacko Sephy, I bet it'd be you. Just don't take it as a challenge because you got enough to do right now, girly!)
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From ANON - fyrbyrd on May 17, 2009
Yes you did.I loved that ending. Sorry I've had the flu this week and haven't been well enough to concentrate, but I hope to get back to mine soon. Thanks again
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From Ringwen on May 14, 2009
Woohoo! You're back! XD ..or more I'm back!!
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From Rina76 on May 06, 2009
Oh, they might be getting a new maid, huh? lol Yazoo wanted to kill her just because she outwitted him - a vampire who should in no way ever let a human get the better of him. Hehe. That was funny. And so was that whole conversation between him and Vincent about what to do with her. I like how Yaz was calling her 'it', showing his total lack of empathy for humans. It's always such a pleasant surprise when you bring new characters in and seeing how they affect our fav vampy couple. Just when they think everything has settled down and bam! Along comes an annoying pickpocket who won't shut up. ^__^

I don't really know Yuffie's character so I can't say if she's OOC or not but from what I saw in AC she seems pretty well on target! Bouncy and hyper and talkative. And you do a marvellous job with Vincent - he's utterly perfect. I don't think there's been one bit in this story where I've said, "Huh, that's not like him." Yazoo may act slightly different than in AC but this is an alternate world so of course his character is not going to be the same. But now that he's a vampire he's showing more typical Yazoo traits - the coolness, calmness and aloofness that distinguishes him (we'll just ignore how OOC and 'retarded' you say he was in ACC). But he's probably better in this than in AC because in this he gets more screen time lol. And he shows more emotion, if only with Vincent. I love what you've done with Yazoo's character, how complex you've made him, so don't worry. He's completely believable and we all adore him. I understand your worry about getting Yazoo's character right. He's probably the hardest one of them all to define, I think. But you are doing a wonderful job with him. Sephiroth is..well, Sephiroth. Hate to admit it but you do get his character amazingly well also. Everytime you write about him I feel uneasy which means you got him down perfectly. Overall, you have nothing to be concerned about with this fic. If I thought you made someone really OOC, I'd tell you!
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From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2009
I agree with Yazoo, for some reason I never liked Yuffie. Sorry not to review lately, mind else where. But I loved the Sephiroth chapters, they fit so well with his character, so no I haven't seen much OCCiness... My life is getting better after a bad low, I hope to write more of Smile this week, I'm sure you'll like the pairing. Keep up the good work too. ;)
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From LamicaLee on May 02, 2009
In my opinion, everyone's story has their own style and the characters need to be made to fit the story; which you have done quite well. :3 Keep up the wonderful work, I'll continue to read. As always I will be highly anticipating your next update. ♥
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From Rina76 on May 01, 2009
Sephiroth is totally evil but I can understand him wanting to steal Yazoo away (who wouldn't want such a beautiful, mysterious creature?) however, I am so glad Yazoo didn't give in! Yay, Yazoo!

It's great to see his and Vincent's relationship deepening, even if Vincent still hides some secrets from him. I'm happy that they have reached a kind of agreement between them. And it's cute how jealous Yaz gets. ^__^ Reminds you he's still a boy, under the fangs.

What is this transformation? I'm intrigued to see what occurs when it finally happens to Yazoo. (Here you are reinventing the vampire myth again!)

But somehow I think we have not seen the last of Sephy. He doesn't go away that easily...

And the drama continues! Nice work. :)
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From LamicaLee on April 28, 2009
^^;; I just realized that I gave you the wrong email address before and that's why I never got it. Silly me. lol I apologize for that, but the ones above are the correct addresses. :3
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From LamicaLee on April 28, 2009
I love your chapters, as usual. ^,^ I didn't get the email though ;~; so sad. But I will repost it again and another email of mine just in case. ♥ One is : Axel.exe@hotmail.com, the other is Lamica_Lee@hotmail.com Just to make sure lol. *hugs* Thanks for trying, hope to see another update soon.
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From Ringwen on April 26, 2009
Yay for Seph/Yazoo love!! XD I REALLY did enjoy the "Allure" fic, and you're right when you say that there sadly isn't much fics with those two.. T.T So THANK YOU!
Eerk... Well you're very welcome to read my fics, I just added another one (Xanxus/Squalo, Hitman Reborn), but believe me when I say that I'm no where near as good as you in writing fics.. u.u

I am a little worried about Vincent.. But I can't wait to see what Yazoo will choose in the next chapter!! And what Seph will do with him! 8D
Another chapter soon please!! ~.^
*glomps*
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From LamicaLee on April 23, 2009
*Swoon* Oh yes... I definitely LOVED this chapter, Yazoo,Sephiroth, blood bath? Oh yes most definitely one of my favorites. xD I would like the link if you please? The email you can send it to is Axel.exe@yahoo.com ♥ Oh and I'm going to have to draw a pic now that I'm inspired by your wonderful story ;D I'll post the link to it here when I do! ^,^ ♥
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From Rina76 on April 23, 2009
Hey, I'm actually the /first/ to review your new chapter! That's a change. I'm usually the last... Just happened to come here to read the latest of Rise of the Silver Phoenix and noticed you'd updated. What a terrific update too! Yazoo has turned to the dark side, huh? Figures. He'd be easily led astray by someone powerful like Sephy, especially since our boy has very little in the way of morals and never really had any to begin with, even when he was human. Shit, in full bloodlust Yazoo would be one fucking scary vampire coming towards you, that's for sure. *shivers*

Yes, I do think in Allure that's how Yazoo would truly be. There IS something just a little bit frightening and empty about him. But for some reason I can't write him that way - truly evil, I mean. I can't make him be soulless and with no caring whatsoever. In my fics, I probably make him a little more emotional and empathic than he should be but I hope that doesn't come across as him being weak. Because he's so /not/ weak and I don't like it when people write him that way. You are not one of those people, my dear, and that's why I love you! Your Yazoo may have issues and may have a lot to learn but he certainly can kick ass when he has to.

Oh no! Your email didn't come through. *sad face* Please try again!
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From Rina76 on April 22, 2009
Oh. I really can't remember that chapter. *makes puzzled face* If you say Loz and Kadaj got killed by evil fishermen, I believe you. But I'm so sad now. *sniffles*

Bathtub sex! All right! That cheers me up. *grins happily* Very hot and desperate, just the way I like it. I love how they draw blood when they kiss. Rar.

Nice little deal Yaz has got goin' on with Rufus. I know it's all supposed to be 'innocent' feeding but I'm sure they BOTH get some kind of twisted pleasure out of it.

But uh oh...*chews nails* The new bloodsucker showing up is not good. Not good at all. Nothing good ever happens when he's around. Only bad, bad things. Go away bad man! :( (Nah, I enjoy the drama! Really! You are the queen of drama! lol)

I think my heart broke when Vincent told Yazoo those three final words. It was beautiful and so, so painful at the same time. *clutches chest, lip quivering*

Excellent work, chicky. I don't know how you manage to keep the suspense up. Or find the time to write so much. I'm jealous. But I truly admire you!

Ooo, I get a free ficcy for being the 100th? YAY! ^__^ You know what I'm gonna ask for, don't you? Kadaj? Mello? Chocolate? Please? ^___________^

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From ANON - Ainaloth on April 19, 2009
YAY!! EVILNESS!! XD MORE!!

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